It was past my bedtime. I looked outside my window. I looked at the peaceful forest. It was unusual because the animals were usually noisy. I looked up at the castle and saw the lights were off. They were normally on.
"Aaah!" somebody screamed and it came from the forest. I ran into the forest.
"Wow" I whispered to myself, "this place is magic."
"Aaah!"
I heard it again. I raced towards it. I saw a screaming unicorn, that was unusual, a screaming unicorn.
I shouted to the unicorn "What are you doing?"
"Sorry if I disturbed you but I was practising neighing."
"Well, a scream is a funny neigh."
Soon I heard a 'ribbit ribbit plop'. I rushed towards it and looked up and saw a frog with a wizard hat on and a scaly silky costume. It turned around. I saw it's goobly eyes and it greeted me.
"Did I frighten you?" I asked
"You sure did!"
"Oh sorry, anyway, what are you doing?"
" I am making wombat stew with worms and sludge in it too."
"Ooh." I said, "That's disgusting."
"No it is actually quite nice, would you ike to try some?"
"No way"
I wondered what I was going to see now. Something scooped me up. It was a bat, a scaly, black bat. It grabbed me and dropped me on it's nest. It landed on its nest and introduced itself.
"Hello, hello, hello" I shouted. I asked him what his name was.
He replied that his name was Betsokay. I thought his name was cool and Betsokay inroduced his friends to me. Their names were Rex and Pumpkin. he also inroduced his kitten and told me her name was Oolah. I thought she was very cute.
However, Betsokay told me that the kitten was going to die because she would not drink. Oolah needed a new owner. I decided to be her new owner. Betsokay told me she needed lots of cuddles and liked going to bed at night time.
When I got back it was still night, because time had stood still while I was away.
In the morning I showed my kitten to my Mum and Mum asked me where I got her.
I replied "The pet shop of course!"
10 comments:
You are really working hard. It is great to see you so excited about your education. Keep up the good work Lily.
Mr Larson
Dad told me about your writing on his blog so I thought I would click over your way to have a bit of a read.
You wrote and interesting story, Lily. I liked the way you finished it with a bit of a twist when you told your Mum that you got the kitten from the pet shop!
That made me laugh.
I look forward to reading more from you.
Allanah K
To Lily
I liked that story Lily.
You are a very good writer.
From Hannah
Hi Lily
Your writing is lovely, i love how you use your imagination.
I really enjoyed your poem too, you are very clever. Big hugs Karyn
Hello Lily! You don't look old enough in your photos to have written such a wonderful story. You must be very clever. I really liked all the interesting animal characters in your story. It is true that what an animal thinks is a yummy meal, we would think is disgusting! I certainly wouldn't want to eat it either :-) Thanks for a great story and all the cool poems you have also written. I look forward to reading much more!
Hi Lily
You are so creative and COOL!!
The best bit is your story.I wish I had an imagination like you.I like the unicorn.I really like that one special story.
Lydia
Hi again.
I forgot to say your a good writer.
Lydia
Hi Lily you are a very good writer I think you should be an author when you grow up. from matthew
hope you have a good day lily.your a wonderfull writer.
jacob
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hi lily
you are an excellent writer.Tell your mum she is a supercallafradulisticexpialadociousteacher.
re an excellent writer.
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